discourse analysis

I need a 5 page discourse analysis paper following the assignment sheet and rubric guidelines attached. The two sources are tiktok that you are observing how they use discourse throughout the video talking about the legal drinking age in the U.S. how does that discourse effect stance, framing, voice, and their position on the drinking age. I have included my rough draft and an example paper feel free to build off of my rough draft and change it around to better align the paper with the assignment sheet. Include the secondary scholarly source whenever it aligns with the discourse being observed